Have a look at my example of how chocolate is made:
- First, the cocoa fruit is harvested from the trees.
- Then, the cocoa beans are removed with a machete.
- After that, the cocoa beans are covered with banana leaves to ferment.
- After fermentation, the beans are dried in the sun.
- Later, they are sent to a factory.
- In the factory, the cocoa beans are roasted in a fire.
- Then, the shell is removed and the seeds are crushed and mixed with milk and sugar.
- A few hours later, the liquid chocolate is poured into moulds.
- Afterwards, the chocolate is cooled and wrapped in foil.
- And finally, the chocolate is packed
and transported to the shop.
Now, write your own description of how to
make something. Choose one of the following:
·
Write the steps in the right
order and describe the process from the beginning to the end.
·
Use connectors to link the steps.
·
Use Passive to describe the
actions.
·
Write between 80-100 words.
By Abel |
By Daniel |
By Miguel |
By Darío |
And now have a look at the ones you did during the holiday:
How cheese is made, by Aitana
|
How cheese is made, by Gabriela |
How Candy canes are made, by Beatriz |
How elastic bands are made, by Eloísa |
Well done Daniel for using colours this time!
ResponderEliminarHello Laura i,0m Daniel I can,t put between 80 and 100 words
ResponderEliminarThat's the most difficult part. Don't worry if you write more or less words, but at least try.
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ResponderEliminarFrom Eloísa
You have to put the title of your writing: How elastic band / sweets / cheese is made.
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Elastic bands are amazing!
ResponderEliminarBy:Ise
I like cheese a lot
ResponderEliminarBy olmo ��
I have Just finished my homeworks and i count 76words.Sorry Laura.
ResponderEliminarBY DIEGOOO
i finished my homework OMG i have 88 words . BY ANIS
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EliminarSorry Laura,I wrote more than 100 words!
ResponderEliminarSara
Hi! I'm Aitana, I have already finished my homeworks, and sorry Laura, I have 122 words...
ResponderEliminarBye bye!
I dont like eloisa one i like miguel one
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